Prayer.
Daughters pray for their mother's healing and realize only too late that the prayer was misguided. Their mother is in pain, is a burden on others and herself. There is nothing to do but acknowledge the mistake. The rest is reality. It's brutal but it is what they have. A brilliant story if you ask me. Nice job!
A link to the story online can be found here:
www.google.com/url?sa=t&rct=j&q=&esrc=s&source=web&cd=1&ved=0CCIQFjAA&url=http://flashfiction.net/2012/06/flash-reprint-corruptionists.php&ei=-TE8UPe7CobU9QSv2YCoCQ&usg=AFQjCNF_ScQbzsdHZ1nKYkZBQ6tI_gBnmg&sig2=DoFtnPQLwdYlMlebIkHoKg
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