Concession.
A woman contrasts chocolate with her lover, pointing out the satisfaction she gets and maintains from chocolate and not from the other. This story could have come off as a bit cliche or even trite but it didn't. There was a clear and unique tone to the narrator's rant that made this very readable and almost addictive...like the chocolate itself. By story's end, the reader is given a treat when the narrator turns the tables. Very nicely done and memorable.
The link to this story can be found here:
http://metromoms.net/2012/05/20/listening-to-the-chocolate-by-rebecca-l-brown/
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